Character Profile: Raze (v1)

I'm starting to need more names to use, first and last. Please throw me any suggestions you have and I'll make note of them.

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Name: Razelin Viselle Atraea
Sex: Female
Age: 26
Year of Birth: 1101 N.E.
Race: Human

Daughter of General Kelis Atraea and Jasmine Viselle, sister of Cassandra, General Raze lost her father to war at the age of eight, and her mother to illness at the age of eleven. After her mother passed away, Cassandra took care of her until her mysterious disappearance when Razelin was thirteen. Shortly before turning fourteen, General Devin took her in to raise her as if she were his own child. Having befriended Devin in the past, she opted to join the military with the original intent of working by his side.

She engorged herself in military training to distract herself from her traumatic experiences, quickly rising in the ranks. Throughout her military career, she received a nickname that played off the spelling of her name, "Raze the Impossible", which stemmed from men's futile attempts at courting her, and the wrath they faced when they stepped beyond their bounds. No one particularly understands the reason why she disfavors men as much as she does, other than General Devin. Other than her difficulty with working with men, her performance and ability to adapt were unparalleled. Although some believed the only reason Raze was initiated into the Royal Guard was due to Devin's influence, many felt that she was the most deserving. Two years later, Devin requested to step down from his position due to his age. To replace Devin, King Marcus bestowed upon Raze the title of Silver Guard, making her the youngest Silver Guard in Rokan history in the year 1123 N.E.. Raze continues to work closely with Devin, who still enacts the role of the King's Guardian.